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Friday, 11 May 2018

SEEL - Paragrph

My SEEL Paragraph

I believe that most students are addicted to their cellphones. this is because I see other kids in my class always on their phone like 24/7 other than focusing on their school work. For example, I go home asking my mum if I can go to the park with my friends, waiting for her to reply, but her reply will always be "Oh what did u say". another example is that I always see other students in my school on their phone other than talking to each other. My final example is that when I go out with my friends to the mall, stay there for like 2 hours without even buying anything but just sit and go on their phone. This can also be linked to those people who are addicted to drugs & Alcohol.


1 comment:

  1. Tyrepa
    Great start. You are discussing about addiction. Can you find some evidence on cell phone addiction? if you do a google search and add site:edu at the end of the search you will only get material published by universities. This is a good indicator that the information is likely to be more reliable. I'd love to see what you find if you do that.

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