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Wednesday, 24 October 2018

Racing with supportment (Creative Writing)


Racing with Supportment

It was a blistering hot day, I feel so sweaty right now and we haven't even started the race yet. I see a lot of cars and I hear a lot of sirens. As I gently wiped my sweat of my head, I see my beautiful family sitting under a big blue umbrella eating ice cream. When the race is about to start, I can hear my family supporting me, so I grinned with happiness and excitement, I see other racers getting ready for the big race, so I did too.

I felt really nervous seeing how fit the other racers were, but at the same time I was excited. We wait, and all I could hear is myself breathing heavily, feeling my sweat sliding down from my forehead, and as I took my last swallow...Bang goes the gun and there I go riding my bike with my carves burning really hot, but Hey! I don't care. it's been forty seconds since we started, and as I go, I can hear my heart beat faster and louder, realizing that i'm actually alone. I breathe calmly and asked myself am I way behind? or am I at the front?

It's been two minutes since we started the race. Wow I see the finish line up ahead, I can see my family and other people getting ready to take a picture, I couldn't believe I came this far. Hearing the crowd saying my name, listening to the sounds of cameras clicking, seeing the flashlight from the cameras. As soon as I past that finish line, I felt so proud of myself, no matter what place I came in, I still finished the race with confidence and my family supporting me. 

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